Family Vacation!

Write about a family vacation. It can be the best, the worst, the funniest... make sure you describe what happened and make your readers feel like they were there with you
My Best family Vacation was when i went to Minnisota. This was my best because i went to see my Grandma. We do lots of fun things like go the Mall of America, we go swimming in some of the lakes, we go see movies, we go out to dinner, go for ice cream,. i will share with you on of my best weeks being there. well it was our first day being there and so we went to go see hairspray then went shopping and then went out to one of the best resturants ever. the next day tuesday we went shopping at mall of america and came home and made dinner with my grandma. the next day we went swimming at one of the lakes then we came home got all ready and went out to dinner. the next day we went to this park and ate lunch at this really yummy place and i orderd the best fish tacos! when we were done eating we went on these bike things and rode alng the lakes. when we got home from our wonderful park experience we made dinner then we went and got ice cream then came home and watched a movie. the next day was our last and we had all of our family come over to my grandmas and we had dinner! why i love this trip is because i 'am with my family!